Text resources:
000 - 2 - apply
000 - 19 - remove second comma
001 - 12 - remove comma
001 - 16 - remove comma
002 - 2 - remove period?
004 - 2 - remove comma
007 - 11 - remove comma
008 - 7 - fingertips
008 - 23 - response
009 - 26,27 - unnecessary caps of last word
009 - 31 - extra space between leading/to
009 - 33 - apparently
010 - 0 - remove comma
011 - 7,8,9 - ! or not to !?
- I used the "!" when you talk to it, so that is what it says in response, not what it reads. The other two, are what it reads. A very very subtle joke.012 - 8,9 - warrior's or warriors' - I'm not sure (however that should not possessive).
012 - 12 - remove first comma
012 - 21 - remove both commas around 'and'
012 - 37 - sense? I still don't understand the sentence
- even in context of the action that creates it. talking to an inanimate object in room 12 (really 31) when someone else is present.012 - 39 - 'Hey,' or 'Hey!'
015 - 0 - remove comma before 'and'
015 - 1 - remove comma
015 - 11 - to
018 - remove comma after 'occasionally' & 'here'
018 - 5 - remove comma after 'her'
020 - 26 - change 'inside' to 'behind'
020 - 29 - too
020 - 32 - caps on G.
023 - 11 - remove comma
024 - 3 - remove caps on 'Evil'
031 - 6 - remove both commas around 'and'
033 - 14 - remove comma
034 - 6 - climbable
036 - 1 - continue
045 - 37 - pluralize minion
045 - 40 - change "just to look" to "just looking"
047 - 18 - change '.' to '?'
048 - 14 - friendly-looking
048 - 17 - remove extra space inside/that
049 - 9 - add comma after 'survive'
050 - 23 - add period
052 - 31 - remove comma after 'Eilonwy'
060 - 10 - change trailing !" to '.' - change ',' to '!'
060 - 15 - remove comma after 'violently'
060 - 16 - remove comma after 'you'
061 - 21 - remove comma after 'unfortunately'
061 - 50 - 'for such' instead of 'such'
062 - 23 - remove comma after 'secret'
063 - 6 - change 'is' to 'are'? Not sure...
064 - 26 - remove comma after 'mirror'
501 - 3 - 'will'
950 - 18 - add space between 'after' and 'all'
950 - 19 - add period at end
Done.
Please nuke this post after corrections are made - it's way too long.